We are learners at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, New Zealand and our teacher is Mrs Grady.
Opharas is working really hard on her reading, writing and she has been doing some baking. Opharas read her favourite book then she wrote a story about what she read. Opharas baked a Carrot Cake with the support from her Mum. She said she enjoyed the time with Mum and learning a new skill.
The Invisible Man.
My character is the invisible man.
The story took place at the school.
The problem was the two bullies who bullied the man.
They forced him to give a huge amount of money,
Otherwise, they will hurt him.
The principal saw the bullies, bullied the man.
The principal rang the police.
The bullies said sorry and took off.
The invisible man was safe and he thank the principal.
The invisible man was happy in the end.
By Martha
Below is the screenshot of Martha's first draft.
